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Romeo

O romeo romeo
is there a guy like you ?
that when you see me you know our love is true
will you want to be with me even if our family disagree
realize i was the one
that our love is more then love
would you give your life for me all the days
knowing that we our soul mates
oh is there a guy like you?
o romeo romeo where are you?

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Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • A Lunar Farewell
    May 16, 2005
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    i can relate

    i like the way u wrote this.very good.i like the way u drew from the movie but to me it had a different feel.its a bit more sad it seems.i like sad,anger and distressed poetry.i guess thats because thats how i was until i found the love of my life.


  • Crazi Beautyful
    May 7, 2005
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    its beautiful

  • Theasp
    May 2, 2005
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    Cute

    Interesting context and you know he'll run like heck!