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heat

the heat of my loins
could yet burn the world
setting ablaze for all to see
with but a touch from my lover
i shall overflow with passion

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Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • Vagabond Samurai
    October 3, 2006
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    Heat is a gift to the world, and it is your gift to your lover.


  • October 3, 2006
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    i love it.. short and to the point..


  • Graphic Purity
    December 10, 2005
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    aw.. very well written I like very much.

    hehe relatable.. so little words but so much emotion


  • December 9, 2005
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    Powerfull

    well written I shall share this with my sub-consious for that I have nobody to share it for. This has power and I have enjoyed the emotion it contains . Good-on-ya-eh?