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me as me

I'm wanting you
to feel you
to have you look
into my eyes
seeing the true me
i hide
i hide
but not from you
you shall know
me as me

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Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • Yellowbook
    August 18, 2006
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    Outstanding

    I love this one and I wish people could really be just them. It was sweet! Good Job!