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Because of You

Because of you I aint afraid to be myself in front of others.
Because of you I aint afraid to get my heart broke.
Becasue of you I realized I don't need you to get by.
Becasue of you I realized there is life beyond you.
Becasue of you I learned how to love somone else better.
Becasue of you I learned we moved too fast too soon. I fell for you too fast too.
Becasue of you I realized how you hurt me has made me a better person.

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This is about my ex
Written May 2nd, 2005

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 10, 2005
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    GOOD WRITE

    Wow, this is good!
    Such optimism coming from heartache.
    Thanks for sharing this write, as well as your comment
    on my poem. Ellie saw it today and she is quite speechless.
    Keep on writing, my friend.
    God bless!

    Brian


  • beautifulbrat
    May 2, 2005
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    err don't you just hate it when you realize all them things? ahh that sucks. but it makes a great write. keep up the good work.


  • Pink Absinthe
    May 2, 2005
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    Amazing

    So true, this poem is strangely like my ex and our relationship. Lovely, strong, powerful and sparks hope for those lost in love.