Twas a sourly day with no one here
present or otherwise to be indisposed of...
Doubts tending to invade the heart
darkening the soul, dampening the spirit!
Not a person to share timid thoughts
Preposterously alone, a lost soul I am
Twas making an ache in my very chest,
A sourly night to be so beautiful!
Condemned to die in a fright, this heart
Twas dark for this uncultivated pearl...
A proper impression to give, if the chance
Yet here I lie a lone soul, a darkened heart.
Social opportunities in ruins, no one to share them
Disheartening, lost soul, dampening my very spirit!
A sourly night indeed.............
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Written May 2nd, 2005
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This is a really deep poem, very good work here..keep it up nd im hopin 2 c more brilliant poems from ya! ~*~Kithnec~*~
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A very thought provoking poem....its strong in it message and makes you think. Great job!
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Wow, u left a comment on a peom that i had left a comment on, so i wanted to see a peice of ur work...and im really glad i did. This piece uve written here is simply beautiful, tragically beautiful. It really moved me and im so honoured for u to have shared this piece with me, thank u
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