Friends and Fellows
The flight of souls lost...
Traveling to the unknown?
Unforeseen failures caught!
To go unto the heavens........
Friends and Fellows!
Doth we know, I thinkst not...
This world finds dark??
Mourning these souls.....
Friends & Fellows!
Alas, to know is to die!
I seeketh not to know!
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Written May 2nd, 2005
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wow, this has so much power, though being a short poem..it is great! i as well like the old english you used, it always gives a more deep meaning to the word..great poem!
oh, and thanks for commenting on my poem
S.C
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Wow I like how you worked in the old english. Very Shakespere like. The pattern is great and I really liked it!
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This was very good. Very original yet not.... it has to be said. I really loved it. I liked the way it flowed so wonderfully and the exclamation marks worked really well throughout! x
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