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It rots the mind indubitably—
Do not pass that doobie to me.
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Author notes
This was intended as a little two-liner, like 'A Cause For Gauze'. I had originally posted it with on a trippy retro-poster collage background. I guess I got a bit carried away looking for an accentuating pic and overwhelmed the terse verse. Perhaps this is a little more subtle. : )
Written November 11th, 2002
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very clever, although i would tend to be of a different viewpoint on this matter
in the words of bob marley and sublime... ~-SMOKETWOJOINTS-~
anyway, nice poem -
don't touch it!
heheheheh
Ah try and say indubitably real quick! try it
Reminds me of Homer Simpson :D
Jadey xXxXx -
don't touch it!
This would look good in the popular magazines that appeal to kids, would it not? -
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Hey..good work. I may be a little late for advice (hehe) but good theme anyway!
Love~ Tasha -
don't touch it!
Good message, Nando.. short and to the point... the pic goes well with it too
Dee -
don't touch it!
To lighten the load, smoke they, some 'weed'
Shorten their road they then burn what they NEED
Love the message Nando -tj- -
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if they would just legalize that crap, we could make some big bucks! -
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Truly hilarious picture! I met a guy who didn't even know his mind was rotted. His house bore the stale odor of the marijuana he smoked and grew in tomato cans. -
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Very nice. -
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puff
puff
give
:D
Good advice Nando.
-Brandon -
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dont twist a joint
cause good it oint -
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short sweet,direct and very much to the point,you are very clever Mr Tater,whatever pic you choose the words are magnified off the page anyway.....I like Janet -
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BLOWn away, and you managed to get the word indubitably in a piece. Brill. -
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A toke of good advice, with two lines,
you gave it twice.
RR -
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i liked it with the trippy background.
i like it with this background.
as i said before.
clever poem nando.
Lisa x
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