A quiet mouth and posture
Like a poinsettia, poisonous -
Beautiful, December -- A snow storm
Clad in tight white with red lips
and vanilla slick skin. God, how I gave
you up? Can only be compared
To heroin, and a slight case of
schizophrenia.
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Written May 1st, 2005
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This is absoulty amazing, from the first word I was hooked---this is so powerful, and sensual, and something I think everyone can look at and get that half-love, half-hate emotion bubbling up. I think this is one of my favorite poems. Thanks for sharing.
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Oh, Wow! Was this about a Sagittarian? I imagine it was! Wow I really like this poem. I'm a Sagittarian and I'm dating a Capricorn... It's working out alright I suppose - for now at least! Wish me luck. Very discriptive poem and I like the part about heroin and Schitzofrenia. Very nice. Thanks for enering!
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this one is cool..the beginning is all serious and then all of a sudden..BAM there's som humor!!!
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The title pulled me into this piece. It doesn't give anything away it is both mysterious and lovely. The content was wonderful and slow, like a nice merlot, the more you drink, the better it is. This piece shows a new growth in your work.
Really love this. -
A quiet reposte and a lingering touch,kiss, sigh.. and then the moons' shadows fall..
Ahh such is the true romance of a heart
I felt pain, longing and that aching need.. the heroin referrence made it very real for me.. felt this to my marrow hun
Pssttt Oi!! you owe me some return reads ya git.. lolololol
love ya loads
~GILL~xxx -
Yeah, that's what it was supposed to say.
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HM this one was a little harder for me to understand. I don't really get what you are talking about. What I get from this is that you were inlove and made a mistake by walking away. Sorry if that is not what this is about. Good job though
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Touching...as always...delightful
~~~POO~~~
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