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Desperado II

When we saw the caravan in the distance that night, i thought for sure i was imagining things.  We had not seen or heard from anyone in many weeks in our treck through the mountains.  But sitting around our campfire we all knew that we had hit the jackpot.  The chances of the traders having any real defenses were so small it was safe money.

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Written May 1st, 2005

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