Waiting here
In the spot we first met
Praying here
For you to come back
Crying here
Missing your laugh
Staying here
Please come back!
In this twisted world
All I had was you
Remember everything
We went through
How could you do this?
Let me die!
And not even feel sorry
Watching me bleed
Ignorant feelings
Is all I need
With the sarcastic twist
That Life left with me
I kill myself slowly
With your memory
Now, all I am
Is an empty shell
I killed my soul
Murdered my heart
Letting your memory
Tear me apart.
Author notes
Well, it was made out of boredom so I'm sorry if its not very good. I like it. Lets just see if you do. All honesty please.
Written May 1st, 2005 user name: brokenpoetry123
Option #1
A contest entry
- Love Is Suicide by Wanted4Murder.
400 points, ended August 9, 2005, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Hurts The Most by Ignis Corpus.
750 points, ended April 20, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem touched a string on my heart. It got to me. Made me think about how things are. I really liked this piece. I do want to tell you it was kind of hard to read cause the back ground and text color was so close together. I do like how you tried. and I will applaude you on that. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
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Thankyou for this comment. I changed the font color to something I hope is easier to read. I wrote this poem about three years ago when I was like 12 or 13. So its pretty old but I thought it would go with your contest perfectly.
Hope all is well,
Chloe
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You are a good writer. I'm going to add you too my favorites list.
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lol!!..sorry your first comment on here made me laugh... neway awesome poetry as usual...i really do wish i could write as well as you....well...yes....keep writting!!!
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I think I might put you on my favorits list.
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Thanks.
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lol love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nd yea i love them that much lol
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Your over flowing comments burn.
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