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Images of Her Love

Broken images in the mirror
reflect dreams that seem to have
shattered as the years pass

Beauty in shambles
all because she was left
by a boy with a singing voice

Light in the darkness
as his hands reach down and
pull her from the abyss which is her mind

Tender love that comes from
a new heart which beats
only for her broken love

Chaos in the quiet
as he watches her dance to the music
her body carrying the music with grace

Serenity in one kiss
so honest that it hurts her to breathe
afraid that her lies will soon be found

Love from a boy sitting at piano
playing his love for her as
she slowly collapses into everything that is right

Author notes

When you finally start to heal from past wounds a sense of fear but also hope kind of takes over you...or just me...but anyways, someone has found me...and I think he just might be someone that wont leave...I hope...
Written May 1st, 2005

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  • a means to an end
    February 14, 2007

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    this is amazing... its almost as if it doesn't make sense but it does... beautifully written! great write


  • May 4, 2005
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    i also hope that you know it is right.i am so happy for you.i hope you are finally getting what you want and need.i am thinking you are...


  • May 4, 2005
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    hey chels,it's care...i nevr knew you were such a poet.i love you.and i hope you love that boy at the piano.and i hope it's the one i am thinking of....i miss you lately, even though i saw you today.we need to catch up.