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every

Every
day without You
is a day i have to bare.

Every
day with You
is a day for *even* tears.

I miss You
every
minute.

I hope for the days that I am counting down to.

I hold back grasping onto You
every
time I softly touch Your satin skin.

I miss a heartbeat for
every
sentence that You speak.

Speak!
Speak!

So that I can prove that
love
is too much for just one life.

Author notes

by "Every day with You is a day for *even* tears" i mean its day meant for everything, every possibility exists, everything will happen, it will be very filling
Written May 1st, 2005

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  • Ee
    May 2, 2005
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    well i like it.... of course i wrote it