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A promise for you

I promise you
that forever
will never end.
I promise you
that always
I will have a smile for you.
I promise you
that one day
I will cry with you.
I promise you
that I won't be able
to not kiss you.
I promise you
that I will run away
as far as i can.
I promise you
that I'll
come back again.
I promise you
that you'll hate me
after a while.
I promise you
one of these for everyday
that I love you.

Author notes

hi. im debating whether i like it
Written May 1st, 2005

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  • Jaded Lily gold member
    May 1, 2005
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    Sounds like the beginning of a deep and abiding love...when the time is right. You are smart not to rush it. I wish I had waited for the right one years ago... Excellent job.

    Lily ~*