When I get to heaven,
Can I catch a shooting star?
Do I get a pair of wings?
To fly to where you are.
Do I get to hug my Grandpa?
Will he remember me?
Can I sit upon a cloud,
And dream the sweetest dreams?
Will I be a perfect angel?
Or will I have a broken wing?
All I know is that I want to hear the choir sing that heavenly note and let freedom ring!
A contest entry
- ~Poetry YOU and I like~ by XhiddenxBEAUTYx.
300 points, ended June 20, 2005, 49 entries
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Awww...I really like this! The imagry is fantastic!!
"Can I sit upon a cloud,
And dream the sweetest dreams?"
I love that! Excellent write!!
God bless -
wow... did you get this idea from a song? it reminds me of the song "Lacey's Song" by Buddy Jewell.
but anyways.
this was wonderful. and it's amazing that we have this great picture of what heaven should be, and we can almost see that chior...
wow, great right. although if you did get this idea from a song, you should put it in your author's comments.
great job!
~Chentele. -
Wow, I really liked this a lot. This was really beautiful. Outstanding.
~Benjamin~ -
Wow, this is my favorite write by you....THIS WAS AWSOME! You really had some great words here I really liked the will i be a perfect angel or will I have a broken wing that was awsome...and i really liked the ending this is my fav peice by u there are more i like but this was just my fav! keep up the great work I will be reading more!
Joshuacrisel -
OMG this is such a great poem honestly it is you put alot of emotion in this which makes the poem flow!
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