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Don't Go

As you go you take a piece of my heart
I feel you slowly slipping away
It feels like I'm being ripped apart
I don't want to lose you
Why does it have to end this way
I want you to stay by my side
I want you to stay caring, stay loving
I want the happiness to stay
Please don't let go, don't move on
Without you I feel lonely and sad
You're the one that's always here
No matter what
You're the one
Who's shoulder I cry on
You're the one
I love
And I don't want to lose you

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Written May 1st, 2005

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  • GothicLolitaGracie
    June 28, 2005
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    love is nothing but a knife

    great poem! Forget aobut Chris. (And I'll forget about my Chris). have fun redecorating. I can really connect to this poem too, I've read a couple others. lol w/e ttyl

  • Hope-87
    May 6, 2005
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    Thanks you guys

  • gto 05
    May 2, 2005
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    This is great sis. Hey I thought I told you to be happy. We can find someone a hell of a lot better then him. You know what I mean. What you need is a goth man, you need a Freak. Just like mine!!! (LOL) LOVE YOU JJ


  • MrsDobbins
    May 1, 2005
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    like it

    this is a great write we all need that special person in our lives to cry on...