Oh, Miss Tiggywinkle
with whiskers so long
to see you walk by me
makes me break into song
With lashes that curve
covers Azure blue eyes
Aloof and uncaring peering
up to the skies
The saunter, the swagger
so haughty and fine
Such soft fur all creamy
tinged chocolaty brown
The song that you sing
is so soothing and calm
except when the tom cat
pays a visit.... alarm!.....
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Written May 1st, 2005
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This was an amazingly cute and well ryhmned poem!I think it would be a marvelous addition or a wonderful part of a children's nursery rhymn book!You described your kitten sooooo well!They are such finiky and independant creatures! -
Thank you I find the easiest way of being discriptive is to picture what I am writing about and analyse each part in stages. Colour plays a large part in my poetry which helps paint the whole picture
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Aww that was cute!!! I loved the last line, it was great. You do an excellent job in describing things in your writing, something I need to work on. Great job on this!
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lol I like dogs, always have always will. However, I like the way cats move and look, and you did a great job of writing it.
Good write,
Jonny
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Glad you enjoyed this purrrfect kitty
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Hey good job I love the description of your kitty
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Thanks, had great fun writing it
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Glad you liked this
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Very descriptive, I like it!
keep on writing 
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Very cute. I love my cat too, I think it is sweet when people write about the simple things...Good job..
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that's cute! lol i like the last stanza..
well written.
aisha
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