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Pretend

My heart is like a fire, it keeps burning hot.
Except when I feel, I've lost everything that I got.
Then I get cold, and I feel there's nobody there.
I feel left alone, with nobody to care.

And I, walk alone on the beach and watch the sun rise.
Take a breath to clear my mind, and then I stop to close my eyes.
Running barefoot on the sand, like I really don’t care.
But then I stop when I realize, there is somebody there.

You said hello, and you took my breath away.
All I could do was stare.
You reminded me of him, all I could do was cry.
And then you said, that you care.

And I, gaze at the stars as I lay with you.
I pray to God that you really love me too.
I wished that day would never end,
And then I realized, it was all pretend.

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Written May 1st, 2005

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  • Summer Kiss
    May 1, 2005
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    This is great! I mean really really great!!!!
    Keep up the good work!!

    ~Summer Kiss~