I used to look at the sky,
And there used to be plenty of Clouds,
Which looked so White !!!
I used to look at the ground,
And there used to be plenty of Grass,
Which looked so Green !!!
I used to look at the Animals,
And they stared back blankly at me.
I used to look at the Birds,
And they used to look blankly at me.
I used to look at the Buildings,
But they used to ignore me.
I used to look at the World,
And it Smiled back at me,
Because I was the only one,
Who loved it the most.
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Written May 1st, 2005
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Wowie!
Wowie, Greatie! I love it! and you know what the best part of this poem is that, you had just joined AP and wrote such AMAZING poetry seeming like you've been writing it since many and many years! I love all your work and really don't care about what the others think!
Anyway, I love these lines and I think you do too! 
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I used to look at the World,
And it Smiled back at me,
Because I was the only one,
Who loved it the most.
And I too LOVE you the most!
Lots and Lots of Love,
*Nida* -
this is very nice...makes the reader wanna go out and look around at all the beautiful things u've described.really cool.
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COURAGEOUS
Oh how inspiring!
I especially love the last stanza;
that's very courageous.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful write.
You're a pro.
God bless!
Brian
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