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love's hope

One ordinary tuesday my world fell apart.
You said the words I dreaded to hear...I don't love you anymore.
Sometimes I still hear them ringing in my ears.
After an eternity of listening to those words,I picked my heart off the floor.
To my surprise it still had a few things inside.
I used courage to rebuild my world stonger then before.
And held onto the hope of love for another day.

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What do you think? Be honest, I won't get mad.
Written May 1st, 2005

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  • Amethystdawn2058
    September 15, 2005
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    I'm glad you liked it. It just came to me one day.


  • TanitaP
    September 12, 2005
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    wonderfully written I enjoyed reading this alot

  • Amethystdawn2058
    June 16, 2005
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    I'm blushing, thank you for your kind comments.


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 16, 2005
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    What do I think??? I think this is an admirable poem...an even more admirable human that wrote it...If you can pick your Heart up off the floor after it's been shattered & still find a reason to Hope, then you're my kind of Poet, for sure...well done, Lady...well done, indeed... Wanda

  • MysteriousA5
    June 2, 2005
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    I like this a lot. It's short, but very honest. People feel like this every minute yet very few have the courage to acknowledge it!! Keep it up...

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