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Vertigo

I've got that perpetual vertigo.


Tears swim behind my eyelids
as they flutter
There spots fight butterflies
in technicolor.

Author notes

I am still working on this one. I tried to force a poem around it and reading it again decided thats exactly how it sounded and I hated it. This thought/stanza just popped into my head one day and I LOVE it so I really hope I can find something to use it in. If you have any ideas about a theme to go with it or anything please feel free to shout them out in a comment!

Thanks.

~Laura
Written April 30th, 2005

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