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Beloved Savior

One amongst many in a crowded town
Merely a child, yet fully a God
Of whom had come, His will at hand
By form, this Christ seemed hardly odd

In sacrifice, He brought to all
The promise of eternity
In years in time, my era rose
And so, this blessing came to me

I’ve come to trust what I can’t see
A Lord, like wind, hidden from sight
The only King to ever live
Whom disbelievers viewed with spite

In this life, which I’ve claimed my own
It is owed, more so, to Jesus
Whom has conquered, risen, and healed
Ignoring the doubt and distrust

The beloved Savior, whom I love
More so than the Earth which He paved
Not in thanks to what I’ve been given
Rather, in thanks to what He gave

Author notes

In this poem, I've used all five of the options. (Not in the order listed, however.)  Now, by request, and by truth, I'd like to proclaim that I am, in fact, a a proud Jesus Freak, and I'm not the least bit ashamed of the Gospel of Christ!  The title \
Written April 30th, 2005

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    May 2, 2005
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    What a beautiful and wonderful write this was my dear friend. I just absolutely love your name as well. Kinda like that commercial "Got Milk" but yours is more powerful "God Jesus" WOoHoo!! Praise God that we Have Him!! For He did pave the way for us. He made it possible for us to get to God And only through Him are we able to make it to Heaven!! WooHoo!! I am thankful that we serve a Risen Lord and Savior!! Thank You so much my friend for entering into this Contest!! God Bless You my dear friend!!


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 1, 2005
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    AMAZING POEM

    Wow , I love this poem, it was simply amazing. I can so relate tothis write. I love these lines,

    I’ve come to trust what I can’t see
    A Lord, like wind, hidden from sight

    As a new Christian it was hard to put my complete trust that He would always be here. But now I have complete faith in Him.Thank you so much for entering this wonderful poem in our contest. God Bless you. Take care , Sandy