I'm gonna make you pay
For all the times you touched my mom
For all the times you made her cry
I'm gonna make you suffer.
For being the asshole
You are
I'm not gonna let you
Get away with this
Your gonna feel her pain.
I'm not gonna let you
Hurt this family again.
Your the reason why
My mom slit her wrist.
For all the times you called her fat
I'm gonna be watching you.
I'm not gonna leave you alone
I'm gonna get my vengeance
When you least expect it
It's not gonna be quick
I'm gonna make you fell her angst.
Your the on who caused it
Therefore it would be just
That you feel remorseful
For everything you've done
To her and her daughters.
Author notes
This poem was written for my mom's ex-boyfriend who.
Written April 30th, 2005
A contest entry
- Broken Hopes && Lost Dreams by Rock-Junkie.
300 points, ended January 22, 2006, 20 entries
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i like this a lot. you did a grat job! good luck in my contest. byeseez
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wow - this is amazing. it's like you've taken all the hate and angst and passed it on to me. i'm lucky to have the family i have, unfortunately it's not the same for all my friends... there are a couple i've had to "help through" - they would have been like the daughters you talking about. I'd do anything to get them out.
great content, context and flow. good luck in the contest, i'd say you've got more than a shot at winning.
-jess
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wow. this is very emotional. You can feel all of the main and anger within. well written.
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wow this is a really powerful poem..you should mail it to whoever your writing it about..i really felt your hatred and pain through this poem, its great
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Awwww thanx
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Wow this was amazing. I felt your pain. I'll let you in on a little secret...Your poems the best one i got so far lol. Anyways I absolutely loved it, it was strong. Thanks for entering my contest.
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