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good-bye my magpie

As you watch my shoulders shake
With the tears of a life time loss

Your heart filled with ache
To know you turned my world into chaos

You said it would be better this way
And I said I still loved you

You said I’d understand one day
I tried to argue

But you turned your back on me
And my head and heart felt so empty

I slowly watched my world die
As you said “good-bye my magpie”

Author notes

this is just about my b/f breakin up with me. and magpie was my nickname...
Written April 30th, 2005

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