God's sparkling stars, dancing in Heaven's vast sky,
His rivers strong, lovely pastures of green,
All have no measurement with you and I,
As our beings meld in raptures unseen;
Not two but one, our mutual soul cries
In pains of need, of want, of love, of wish
And as cherubic strings lace with our sighs
Wounds heal, we fill, with the heat of our kiss.
Our minds entwine, combine, piecing a whole—
Coalescing—our hearts have woven one;
Our spirit lit, an unwavering coal
Meant as such since before time had begun.
I into you, just as you into me.
I find my strength and solace within thee.
Author notes
Written January 19th, 2002
A contest entry
- Love poetry by Reanna Eryn.
400 points, ended April 7, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is very beautiful and the first one in this contest that i am going to applaud. thank you for sharing this with me today and i wish you the best of luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you so much!
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The first line reminds me of this song called, "The Last Song I'm Wasting on You" by Evanescence..."Sparkling grey, through my own vains". Nonetheless, this outstanding, beautiful. I strive to write like this one day.
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Thank you so much! What lovely comments. I have never heard that song but I will have to look it up! Thanks again!
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You're very welcome. It's a very lovely song, or at least I'm convinced so. Have a great day, much love to you.
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Simply expressed and yet weaved together extremely well.Thanks for entering and best of luck
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very nice
wow, lots of emotion and very vivid, very nice write, i like the flow, its very good, awesome write, good luck in the contest -
Thank you so much for selecting my poem for your gift! I really hope the couple enjoys your thoughtfulness.
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Thank you for such an encouraging comment!
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I'm so flattered! Thank you for your generous comment. I included permission within my author's note.
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I'll tell you that yours is the first and only so far that I've also applauded in addition to commenting on. Your talent in writing and words is undoubetdly clear in this piece, and radiates loveliness. I adore this piece. It is passionate in its simplicty, and delicate in its complexity - very well written!!! Please, If I have permiossion to use this, make sure you say so in your authors comments. Thanks beyond appreciatoin for your entry!
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Wow Wow Wow Wow Wow. I don't know what else to say. you really have a way with words.
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