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Chapter4 lovers untitled

Shanna was unpacking her dishes as the door bell rang. "I'll get it!"
Shanna screamed. Robby was in the ofice on his computer trying to find a new job. The doorbell rang agin. "Comming!!" Shanna ran to the door. She slowly put her hand on the knob and twisted it. She gave the door a little tug.
"HI!" Said a lovely woman standing befor her. She had shoulder lingth silky blonde hair. She wore a light yellow sweater with a white shirt under it, she wore white slacks and the same light yellow sandles.
"Good day" Shanna said a little hesatently.
"You probly don't know me but i am Mindy."
"Oh hello Mindy"
"We are naghbors...isn't that grate!" Softly Mindy giggled.
"Oh what house do you live in?" Shanna questioned.
"The 2 storey brick house right over there." Mindy pointed to a house two houses from Shanna."Well anyways I brought you some cookies!"
 "Oh thank you so much! My husband and I adore cookies!!" Shanna took the plate from the ladys hand. Mindy looked about 40 or 45. She was very pretty.
 "Oh "your" Married?"
 "Yes, would you like to meet him?" Shanna asked
 "That'd be lovely!" Shanna guyeded Mindy through the kitchen and through the hall to the 3rd door on the left. There was Robby sitting @ his computer

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Written April 29th, 2005

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