Come to me
Join my reality, my passion
A story has never been told
of a star fills your daytime
All the time.
Behind the gloomy strings I rised
Washing their skins with my ablaze
Shining, glittering creating beams
A guide for the lost ways and distance.
Would they feel me
Could they fill my emptiness
Am I a part of their lives,
As they are a piece of me.
* * *
Above the blue planet I played my melody
participate their solitary souls
feeling, cheering, dancing with it
An immortal signal.
Generations continuing where the olds stopped
Witnessing with the eyes of truth
The pathetic play with fake faces they made.
* * *
Around the bloody rays I decided
To make a trip to the other world
With vows to back again
To melt the nightmares in your head
To be reflected by the sand
Hoping that somebody, someday
Somehow, could understand.
Author notes
Written April 29th, 2005
A contest entry
- Russian Roulette by onerios13.
300 points, ended May 16, 2005, 10 entries
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Come to me
Join my reality, my passion
A story has never been told
of a star fills your daytime
All the time
This was a delightful entry, filled with all the good stuff that makes a piece stand out from the others. Wonderful descriptions, effusive emotions, and a lovely ending. Very nicely done, and thank you for entering. -
hehehhahhaha, karma does do that to us and in the mind they will always stay and play and play in the mind rehearsed over again till they dance in the sand and play like a harp of chords in the water of jewel....
just play ing with ya
LOL
I like it
warped mind at this hour I have
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