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The Poets of Sound and Light



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The poets in our heads
are poets of sound and light-
they are constantly fighting
the noise of both.
THEY HAVE TO YELL!

The poet in my head
can’t get out
through my mouth,
we might as well
remove our ears,
I’ve sewn it shut
to FIGHT THE SOUNDS!

You could seal your eyes
from the noise
but then there would be no way
to enter your head
by WAY OF LIGHT!

So here are poets of light and sound,
but they are drowned
in the intensity
of SOUND AND LIGHT!

The poet of light 
will enter your mind
through your eyes
and not your ears-
so be prepared
to FIGHT THE NOISE OF LIGHT!

If, however, you remove your eyes,
and keep your ears,
you'll have to FIGHT THE NOISE THERE TOO!


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La-la-la-la-la.
Me-me-me-me-me.
Did the poet get through?
That wasn’t the poet of sound
but the poet of light.!
Did he reach you
through ALL THE NOISE?

So the poet of light writes:

“The kitten reading the magazine tonight
 while eating cake by candlelight
 saw not the handle on the rug
 or the scarf in the branches high above.”

Notice, you heard no sound
through the noise.
Here, light is not affected
by the NOISE OF SOUND!
But, the words would have echoed
in your head
in quiet solitude,
yet in your head
that echoing sound is not affected
by THE NOISE OF LIGHT!

.................................

So we near the END!
We re-fasten our ears
and pull out the threads from our lips.
Our minds are lost once again
in the din of sounds
and blinding lights
that once again assail us.
The mouths begins to move again.
WE CANNOT WIN!

................................

So the meaning of words
grow distant and dim
as the poets of sound and light are swallowed
by the sea of noise
of lights and sounds
that OVERWHELM!

Such poets wait
in the quiet corners
of our large minds
until the noise
of lights and sounds
GO AWAY!



 

 


 

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Author notes

La-la-la-la-la.


Inspiration:
As I strolled down the avenue
I had to put pen to paper-
A philosophical insight just hit me
that I had to share
about the poets in our heads.
Not too deep, but promising.
But all that changed once I began
and encountered this background that I modified
from the contest's background,
and my purpose changed to creating a unique experience
that related poetry and noise!

Inspiration for the background:
The background of the contest!

Contest Note: I commented on 'Across the Sea' and others.
Written April 29th, 2005

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  • SexyAngel0418
    May 2, 2005
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    wow AP Daddy... THis is an awesome write!!! You did a great job!!! And I love the background!!! Good luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • Anthony-
    April 30, 2005
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    Wow this is great. The whole tone and atmosphere of the piece is in a realm of it's own. You have created a very stable and cool piece to read. Tony.


  • Mannequin
    April 29, 2005
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    I have a headache from the background now but i'll still try to put together somewhat of a decent comment...or not! Maybe i'll just say I thought i was insanely genius and end it at that. What's the point of empty, meaningless words and expalanation when a simple applause can say it all. I will shut up now and applaud...but first I have to say it's an awesome write. Wow, I really do need sleep!


  • Oleander
    April 29, 2005
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    This is really different and interesting. Good luck!


  • lively banter
    April 29, 2005
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    This is one of the most creative poems I have ever read. With the crazy background and the sound, the reader got a very good idea of what you go through. When the sound finished loaded it freaked me out at first and I jumped lol. The whole idea gave me the feel of what an Autistic person goes through. The poem itself is wonderful as well. Very interesting and creative. Great job.
    Edited on May 06, 8:55 p.m. because 'I'm stupid'.

  • Theasp
    April 29, 2005
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    Thanks

    How's your AS, mine is doing good, thank you. Wonderful read of what i go thru at two am or 4 pm or 11:30 any time when it comes it comes, must write must write!


  • imonlyme7
    April 29, 2005
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    This is just wonderful, like all the other's I've read by you. You are the greatest. Good luck in the contest.

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