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Giving it Over

All I have is you.
All I can do is pray
and seek your word

I'm devistated,
Disappionted.
I imagine you feel much worse

Lord, I care
and so do you
I'm giving this over.

I can't just shove this aside,
To forget, rot, Burn.
I relingquish it all to you

I thank you for being here,
I wouldn't be here with wothout you
I couldn't make it without you.

I'm talking to you.
You made that disicion in your heart.
No, I don't hate you.
But I do think the time is a apprioprite for rightous anger.
Do you see how you hurt me?
More ultimately, God,
The one you say you love so much.
Yet you won't obey his word!
If you love him you'll obey his commands
and do all that you can to.
I hope that you know that I'm talking to you.

Author notes

First part i'm talkin' to God, the last part, about who i was talking to God about.
Written April 29th, 2005

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  • bluebaby92
    May 11, 2005
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    great work, i love how awesomely it flowed

  • Silmarwen10
    April 30, 2005
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    It was great Em I loved it good work keep it up luv ya