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Kiss Me

Take my hand
And hold me gently.
Run your fingers
Through my hair.

Stroke my back
And caress my cheek.
Hold me closer
So I inhale your scent.

Frame my face
With the softest touch.
Gaze into my soulful eyes
And silently proclaim your love.

Trace my lips with a finger;
Show me you hunger for me.
Take my lips with yours
As my eyes flutter shut.

Slowly moving and softly pressing
Touch your tongue with mine.
With gentle explorations
Mix your pleasure with mine.

Mold my will to your desire
And make my heart race.
Give me pleasure but take as well,
Until our souls combine.

      KISS ME    





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Written April 29th, 2005

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  • Girlinthewild
    May 18, 2005
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    Awwww! I loved this poem! It is so filled with emotion and romance! Great job! Your descriptions are fenomenal! This poem is very beautifully written!! I love it!!!


  • josh-13
    May 2, 2005
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    AWWWWWWWWWW, are you on your period or somthing??? THis is too sweet, So sweet it will give you cavitys,


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    April 29, 2005
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    This is an awesome write. Was so beautifuly done. Very descriptive and creates a great visual within ones mind. Keep up the great writes.

  • SweetPassion08
    April 29, 2005
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    wow, this was lovely. i really liked the description in here you really get a very nice visual. great job!