The place I once did loved
Is forever gone
Taken from me, withdrawn.
This past history
is a long lost mystery.
I have learned many things
I have grown new wings.
I'm nobody's friend
I'm nobody's lover.
I am just another body in the crowd.
Somebody no one wants to her aloud.
No body will know if I don't come
The thought makes my body go numb
I feel the pain and the hurt
I also feel like I'm in the dirt
I reached up, to no ones hand
I have to get up on my own and stand.
Stand alone without any help
My knees are weak, my head is down
I'm to scared to look around.
I begin to shiver and as..
a tears rolls down my face
I realize I used to love this place.
Author notes
umm well its just how i feel right now about a place that used to mean the world to me! umm i did feeling alone #13 and i read the poem I'm Sorry by vericalychallged!
Written April 28th, 2005
A contest entry
- Any kind of Poetry by Silmarwen10.
300 points, ended May 16, 2005, 21 entries
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This is good i liked it great job keep it up speak your mind and thanks for entering my contest
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OMG! That is wonderful! That really awesome! You have no idea how much I can relate with this! This was amazing! I really love it!
I really wanna hug you for writing this!!!
I really love this!!! Thank you for entering my contest! I'm speechless! this is something I've been meaning to write about! Really I think you stole my thoughts or something! WOW!!!!! I really really really love this! Thank you so much! This poem is amazing! Best wishes! <3-Erin
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It's good, I'm not sure I got it all the way but I definately relate to parts. Keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
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