Hiding away in my room,
I'm alone,
Crying tears,
Wishing for someone or something to...
Take this anger,
Take this pain,
Take it all away; to just...
Let me die,
Let me go, if only...
God would take me now; PLEASE...
Don't let me go onto another day
Let me fall asleep and let me soul free
Let me never awake from this sleep,
My body is becoming weak,
I'm no longer strong,
I'm falling in so deep,
Blood stains the bathroom floor
For I am reopening old scars,
I'll go to school with long sleeve shirts,
Students seem not to notice,
Teachers wonder,
But never seem to have time to ask,
When I arrive home; its the same thing...
They never have a second for me,
They want to see me collapse,
But Instead I'm...
Hiding away in my room,
I'm alone,
Crying tears,
Wishing for someone or something to...
Take this anger,
Take this pain,
Take it all away; to just...
Let me die,
Let me go, if only...
God would take me now.
Author notes
Schools getting even more stessful...I am angry with my parents...
what else is new?? everythings been getting on my nerve and I hate life Yup! wow! sooo dramatic!
Written April 28th, 2005
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Aw, I think we all feel like this in some point in our lives. We should just remember that God makes everything happen for a reason and we should be strong. I've felt like this many times before but it all gets better, dont worry
You expressed yourself really well, keep it up.
~Lana
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I know exactly how you feel. I have gone through the exact thing, but you know it will eventually get easier. I love to read your poetry. It is mesmerizing how you, one person by just your words can change my whole day. Thank you and never give up. Keep fighting until there is nothing left. Don't let your family get you down. Stay strong and keep writing.
Much love
Nessa/RedMidnight
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Great write and powerful but hey.. dont wish your life away... its precious not matter how hard it gets.. School will soon be out.. bear with it.. you can do it.
Hugs Lori
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this was amazing...i could feel the pain in it and im sorry your going through this-i hope your pain goes away----love
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This is An AWESOME poem. I love the writing style, I love the emotion and I love how the message can relate to other people. I think this poem is how most teenagers feel or go through and this is an awesome way of putting those feelings in writing. I'm sorry your life isn't the greatest right now and trust me I can relate to that in soo may ways. I'm just glad you have a way to get atleast part of your anger of your chest. Great Job!!!!
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powerful write.. i needed to read one bad tonight... im going thru a rough time myself.. and i feel some of these feelings and i love how you said all of this and pieced it together... awesome job man.. keep it up .. keep your head up.. time will make everything ok somehow... DreamR
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