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Confused

Vary from microscopic to enormous....
A simple peasant- Godlike creature
Alone with my mind- Communicative with the world
Hated- Loved
Naked- Full dressed
Wrong- Right
Stupid- Genius

what's happening.....
?.?

3,5,8.........
a,h,k.........
wtf?!

like i was high....

Author notes

the fastest poem writen....by me....and the weirdest....
Written April 28th, 2005

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  • Bride Of Hate
    May 7, 2005
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    very weird but absolutely amazing write keep it up!

  • heartofpainfultears
    May 2, 2005
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    this is so weird but good on a way

  • borut16
    May 1, 2005
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    Now I must say I enjoyed it, even though it was written fastly!
    I enjoyed the contrasts and showing of bipolarity of this world. That's how I interpret it.
    Great of you to dare using a smiley in a poem!
    Edited on May 01, 1:22 p.m. because ''.


  • Mandy Pants
    April 29, 2005
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    hm this reminds me of how i feel sometimes with a certain person, like my thoughts are clear but then i try to speak or move and im all "alkdkfjsdkl" like that. good write not sure what its about but good


  • Lost In My Thoughts
    April 29, 2005
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    wtf! lol, it is very strange, keep up the good work!

    Tiffany


  • estelm4
    April 29, 2005
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    Strange, but likable just the same.
    Keep writing!
    Keep posting!


  • Leala
    April 28, 2005
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    yes confusion it is

    hmm a very different write. It took me twice to actually get it down but I understand it. I think it might be easier to read and understand if you maybe filled it out some but that is my opnion. take care and god bless
    ciao
    leala


  • John Rock
    April 28, 2005
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    it wasn't exactly my goal well....just feeling weird sometimes...you know powerful and weak....weird really thank you for the comment


  • xVowsareSpoken
    April 28, 2005
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    hah, this is definately weird my friend. But, none the less interesting (in the good way) and good. I like it, the beginning was really awesome, I liked that, it kind of made me laugh near the end, was that your goal? lol. Well anyway, I like this.. it sounds like you're high! lmao. Great poem Rok.

    Take Care,
    Jasmine

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