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Its a long, long road

Its a long, long road
And I know It'll get cold

They are long, long nights
But My mask hast to stay tight
I don't know what'll happen
If my mask come unpinned


It's a long, long Road
and I know its gonna get cold

I've been here so long
The two years have been prolonged
but now that mask slipped
and I'll tell you that cold air nipped

It's a long, long road
and I know its gonna get cold

You saw my face
and I know my place
my true colors soared
and now I'm never bored

It's a long, long road
and I know its gonna get cold

I have two colors
they are both good actors
for I am bi
sorry about the lie

Its a long, long road
and I know its gonna get cold

They are long, long nights
I don't know what'll happen

Its a long, long road

I've been here so long
but now my mask has slipped

and I know its gonna get cold

You saw my face
my true colors soared

It's a long long road

I have two colors
for I am bi

AND I KNOW ITS GONNA GET COLD

Author notes

I'll let you guess what this is about...tell me how this could fit to your life plz
Written April 28th, 2005

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  • Northshore64
    December 8, 2005
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    super smiley!!!

    I really like the idea behind this poem!!!
    Great work and keep it up!!!
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  • May 2, 2005
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    I love this!! Great job! I'm pretty positive you'll get 2nd place. Thanks soo much for entering my contest!!

    ~!dagger!~