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Vampire Story *Part 2*

Again I fell to sleep
And began to see
What I've now become
What I'll always be
I awoke later on
It seemed like a thousand years
I had a crazy craving
For innocent people's tears
I got out of my "bed"
Walked into the night
My hungry eyes glowing
Causing so much fright
I walk up to a young man
Taunt him with a touch
Tell him he's all I want
And that I WANT him so much
Then I bite his neck
Drink every single drip
Blood flowing in my mouth
Loving every drip
Then I throw the body
On to the cold dead ground
Lifeless bloodless helpless
Is how he will be found
I go back to the town
To find some more life
To pursue my endless craving
And to cause more pain and strife
After a few more feedings
I return to my place
And there waiting for me
Is my maker's face
He says I did so well
He is so proud of me
I smile at him sweetly
With playful eyes he sees
I lay down in my box
He lays beside me now
Kisses me so sweetly
Then leaves with a humble bow

The End

Author notes

Okay this is the end, hope you like it
Written April 28th, 2005

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  • DevilsWrongHand
    May 3, 2005
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    Thank you watuwant. i'm glad you like it!
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Watuwant silver member
    May 2, 2005
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    The end? Eternity does not end...
    Keep them coming, please!
    peace
    doug


  • Feisty Rocker
    April 29, 2005
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    good job. very interesting. i guess its because i didnt read part 1. good job.