Caring: Helps Nothing!
With honest feelings of caring, I allowed my poetry to speak..
Speaking out to someone, Who I thought might feel weak.
My words were took and twisted, The meaning wasn't there,
So what the hell is the point, Of me even trying to care??
I know the facts of the relationship, I know the whole deal,
But still you seek for answers, And scars that never heal.
Maybe I should just stop caring, About everyone and everything..
Because caring never does me any good, It only causes me pain.
I give my love to those I think deserve it, No matter the price.
Offer a hug from miles away and sometimes give my advice.
But it's fine if you don't want it, Chances are it's always gonna be there,
It's up to you to see the good in my words, It's up to you to know I care.
Maybe this is the point for me to walk away from it all,
Because God knows I can't stand back and watch another Angel fall.
Only pain will come and swoop her away, Destroying who she used to be..
I didn't want to see that happen, I didn't want her to end up like me.
But still my caring heart does no good, It never seems to help.
Instead I should just push the feelings aside, And care about myself.
But that would never truly work, Because it's to late for me..
Still I thought I could do some good, If I helped one soul be free.
My words meant nothing, But I'll admit a part of me thought they would.
Somehow I thought she'd read between the lines, And see the greater good.
My heart was in the right place, There wasn't nothing for me to gain..
All I did was offer support and "love", And all it brought me was pain.
The time has come to say good-bye to trying to help others like me,
I'll give up and close my eyes as they become what they feel they should be.
True I'll always care no matter what happens in the very end,
Because I'm always going to sit and wait for the day they need a friend.
Author notes
I really don't want oppinions about this.. It's a venting poem, I think. I don't care what any one thinks it's about, This write was for me and me alone. I know who it's about, But that's my buisiness. But this is true, I quit caring... Yeah, The few people I do care about here.. I will continue to care for, But no longer am I going to lay my heart on the line.
Written April 28th, 2005
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after being privy to your constant improvement in your writing,it saddens me to know that something has caused you to have to use that talent to have to vent so much pain.to know you are in this pain is bad enough but to know that your caring for someone caused it is worst.sometimes we have to take care of ourselves before we can help others.you are a great person and never think otherwise.try not to let bitterness rule your decisions.
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well hunny whethere u want an opinion or not ur gunna get it damn it...this was aweosme very nicely written powerful and flawless
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OMG this brought tears to my eyes. I felt so much anger and pain reading this. I am sending a WHOLE BUNCH of hugs to you. I loved this poem. I am going to add this one to my favorites. This is REALLY good. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more. Applauds to you for this excellent write. Tina
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oh crack i forgot how to do a rose... (such a dork) anywho's I Loved it truely. Emotional like all the rest, bu you can feel it as your reading it. I feel like such a goof cause i don't know what to say.
:: huggles n kisses:: i'm here for you always.
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Thanks for your comment Kaitlyn, Glad you liked it .. And woohoo, Congrats on the 200 critique's
Frances Lyn
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oh..I forgot to tell you...Your my 200 critigue...So..Yay you, you get free hugs and EXTRA kisses!
*Big ass hugs and wet, sloppy kisses*
Kaitlyn
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wow. OMG, this is amazing. One of THE best poems I have read from you. There is so much anger in it...And...Wow, its...Argh, Perfect! I love love love love love love love it! Alot!! I feel/felt the same at one point/now. And...Wow, you did a WONDERFUL job puting so much hurt and..I guess love into a poem. Please, get better...Know im only an IM away (i know im not much to talk to...But i'll listen..)
Love you always,
Kaitlyn
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