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The Dark Goddess Of Fate

She has saphire eyes
That glow with flame.
She runs from the hell
From whence she came.

Her hair flows to her waist
The color of midnight.
Her tongue drips with venom
Transferred by her bite.

Her luscious pink lips
Might entice a kiss;
But a pleasure-filled death
Would come with this.

Elongated lashes
Widen her eyes.
A deep, crooning voice
Ushers forth her lies.

Dressed all in black
Is the Dark Goddess of Fate.
Shower her with bloody roses
Then sit by her there and wait.

Watch her tears flow forth
As black as her hair;
Peer into the puddle
And find your future there.

Follow the Goddess
And pamper her now.
All your love and service
To her you shall vow.

She wears her fragile soul
Upon the sleeve of her gown;
And her heart is forever seen
To be held in her frown.

She is a dragon’s spirit
Cloaked in a woman’s flesh.
And a vestibule
In which love and hatred mesh.

Purge yourself of all humanity
You now belong to the Goddess.
You looked into her pool of tears
And saw yourself within her bodice.

Protect and love her;
Nurture and care for her.
She is now your life
And has swallowed the person you were.

Drink her blood-lined tears
To gain her righteous love.
Kiss her rosy cheek
To deepen your love.

She is now your charge;
She is now your beloved;
She is now your everything;
Where once you were unloved.

She is your soul now;
She is your blood now;
She is your essence now;
All abilities to you she will endow.

She is the one you love
And you must agree.
She is the Dark Goddess of Fate
And I am she.


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Written April 28th, 2005

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    May 17, 2005
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    Very very good. I like this alot. From the flow to the rhyming. You wrote it so well and it can be very hypnotic. Great write.

  • Joy Division
    April 28, 2005
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    Kick ass

    This is very good. I love the use of imagery. Its perfect. A wonderful write. Its astonishing how much imagery there is! She wears her fragile soul
    Upon the sleeve of her gown;
    And her heart is forever seen
    To be held in her frown.
    That just kicks ass.


  • Sir Shay
    April 28, 2005
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    Beautiful as always.

    ~Stormy~


  • josh-13
    April 28, 2005
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    Pop goes the comment cherry. This is realy good. I love it, I don't belong to the godess though, The godess belongs to me. I love it, Its enchanting. I found the flow to be hipnotic. I love this one, OH Joy!!!