She wants to be held, can't you see
her infatuation for him, is the reason she breaths
Her tender kisses, her sweet sensual smile,
she senses his pain, all the while
All her attention, to him she will give
Longing for him to see, only for he, she will live
Love hasn't yet been over come by sorrow
she isn't dreading the day, just the wait of tomorrow
She's stuck on the wrong side of the Fairytale romance
Knowing with this infatuation, she'll never again have that chance
The chance at real love
Just the chance of his infatuation, the infatuation,she shoved, all aside, just for him,
Knowing in the real world, she never love again...
Her kisses are sweet, she has a sensual smile
his sadness makes her heart ache, all the while
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About nothing
Written April 28th, 2005
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yeah.... great poem dude
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nice work
You are a very talented writer -
nice work
I love this poem, you are an excellent writer, keep up the good work -
yea... it's about someone... but he was hovering when I wrote it
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Hmmmmm...that is an amazing thing to be able to do..put that much emotion and feeling into something that is about nothing.
I know that I have felt this very same thing, not easy thing to face. Excellent job...
keep writing
~Kristy -
Pretty good, I liked it. Not to be picky, but there were a couple spelling/grammar errors, but that's okay. It was really good and I loved the emotion behind it. Keep writing!
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