Broken and alone
No where to call home
Lost and confused
Used and abuse
Raped and torn apart
Strangled by the heart
Always crying
Slowly dying
Bleeding just to feel
Losing sight of what's real
Not liking what I see
Hating what is me
Author notes
Okay, I read a lot of poems, and copied down some commonly used rhymes, and then wrote a poem about myself using them. Its not that great, but oh well.
Written April 27th, 2005
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There's so much pain and stress in this.... but it's beautifully writtwen and flows really well! I really like the emotion in this, it must have been hard to write about. Great work!
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Hey wow that was really good but it came from you so it would of course be good. Never give up on writing and don't forget me when you are a famous poet I gave you a lift to Barnes and Nobles and the Library. I deserve moneyies!
-XKristinX -
Wow. I can relate to this so well.... if ya ever need to talk I'm here...
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wow....lot's of pain. life is a bitch .....alot...i know. but all you can do is keep on truckin. i hope shit gets better for you....and do me a favor....smile!
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were you reading my high school diary when you wrote this? but seriously..it sounds so much like something i would have written so im gonna say good job and i like it
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