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Hobo

There once was a hobo who liked to fling poo
And sometimes he went to the zoo
He drank too much booze
And started to snooze
Then he woke up when a monkey screeched "Boo!"

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Written April 27th, 2005

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  • Bexter
    January 21, 2006
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    Funny

    lol. so many interesting poems to read. this is funny. thankyou for entering


  • DeadxxDaisies
    July 13, 2005
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    lmao... I love limericks but I've never written any. : eels inspired::

  • piccola silver member
    May 2, 2005
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    I really like the humor here .. but for some reason, the first line seems to long; my brain isn't working too well lately .. so maybe it's me .. but I think it's hilarious. you must visit the zoo a lot LOL