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would u love me

Do you love me?

You say you love me,

You say you care.

But do you love me?

Do you care?

My reality seems to fade into my dreams,

And everything is never seen.

Wishing I was with you tonight,

For that special song or two,

Or maybe just to sweep me off into the reality of my everlasting dreams.

I am starting to doubt my love,

And fall into the deep, black hole.

Once I start to fall,

Your sweet touch rescues me from the everlasting journey to no where.

But then you’re never there,

And I fall deeper, and deeper as my love for you goes on.

How it pains me to go on,

But I love you with all my heart.

And to leave you would be like jumping off the world and never coming home.

Excuses don’t cut it,

Lies won’t get past me.

I just want to know the truth...

Do you love me for me?

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Written April 27th, 2005

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  • La Dama del Ayer
    May 3, 2005
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    Ah daddy this beautiful yeat sad at the same time. My favorite part is: and I fall deeper, and deeper as my love for you goes on.
    How it pains me to go on
    Girl you know you always amaze me with all your wonderful poetry. You write straight up from the heart and that’s really important cause that’s what poetry is all about. Expressing your feelings and letting it all out. Great write!!!!
    VIVA LOS LATINOS!!!!(and every1 else )

  • DoubleClick
    April 28, 2005
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    what a good work...... saying (i love you) doesnt always means they love....or even can love.....thank you for sharing it