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Hush my baby

Hush my baby
Don't say a thing
We'll sit here and rock
And wait for the storm to stop
Let's sit in the dark
And not venture outside
We'll simply wait
And imagine while we abide
Let's imagine a castle
A perfect little world
For bad little boys and girls
A world with no mistake pregnancy's
And no diseases
With no murders
Of loved people that is
We're always high
with purple penguis walking by
We'll have friends
With "the good stuff"
Always free
Fountains of alchohol
and everyone's horny
And always willing to give in
A place where chaos reigns
And no one opposess this
a constant party
With constant delirium
Where no one dies
No cute butterflies
But raging stingerless hornets
And unicorns that charge
Whips and chains are mundain attire
And everyone joins in
Now my baby
what do you think?
Do you like this world
Or will you choose
Flowers and pretty flying things?

Author notes

I have no idea what this is all about.... I was out of it the day I wrote this
Written April 27th, 2005

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  • ICaughtFire
    May 20, 2005
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    ...I love penguins..but I really hate alcohol and stuff so...>>..meh.
    -x-


  • MessedupMarionette
    May 4, 2005
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    Great

    That was very cool... kind of twisted while being attractive at the same time... good job


  • May 4, 2005
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    Ha! I love this. I love the way you twisted things, talking about a dark place, but making it feel very inviting. Sound like a pretty interesting and fun place!

    Definitely worth the read!
    ~Lynnette


  • ShadowStalker
    May 4, 2005
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    ok. kinda weird but I liked it. This wasn't an ordinary prayer type of thing and that's what I liked about it. Excellent job adn really did enjoy reading it...

  • kekebebe25
    May 4, 2005
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    hey i like ur poem i think ur a really good writer

  • SalionShade
    May 4, 2005
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    This is fabulous and spectacular I love how it starts out like a lullaby.
    ss

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