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Good Bye

All I want is to feel your hold
Your kisses and breath, upon my neck
Your hands running down my back
I crave your touch
But
You look at me
That look in your eyes
I hate what I see
Must we say good bye
Tears fall down my face
I look at you and turn
Wishing to be another place
You reach out
I want to shout
"Don't touch!
It's too much"
Why do you touch me, tease me
But not want to please me
You say this is the end
But we can be friends
I don't want that though
Not now, not ever
So this is for for eve
  Good Bye

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Written April 27th, 2005

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  • gto 05
    April 27, 2005
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    It's good,kay. She you at school!

  • bymyself
    April 27, 2005
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    I've been their. It's too hard to just be friends when you truly love someone. So you have to leave at least for a little while.