His left her grasp,
Disappeared from her life.
She sits alone,
Taunting herself.
But yet no tears full down her cheek!
His face still in her memory,
Grotesque beyond compare.
She looks anxiously at her wrist,
Will that make i better.
But yet no tears full down her cheek!
His funeral she couldn't bear,
Peaceful he now lay
She See's the blood on her wrist,
Determined to meet him again.
But yet no tears full down her cheek!
Author notes
This is a poem I have writen about my brother 'Aaron' who has passed away. I wont to see him again and I will succeed!
Written April 27th, 2005
A contest entry
- Your Best Work Only by drowningintheembers.
600 points, ended April 27, 2005, 7 entries
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hi thanxz 4 d comment!
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bbz i sware i commented on this luv it any way g8t poem
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i think one of my biggest ever fears is loosing one of my really close family. this kinda gives hope of a life after the fact, godforbid any thing like this ever happen. u show strengh and will, something i'm afraid i'll find out i never had.
blessed be and may the words always help to mend broken hearts
pete -
Hiya 'IDreamAlot'
Thanxz for the comment!
I don't know if it is my best for it was just a emoshion!
I have writen a differentone now
All my love1
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxSIngle GirlxX -
WOW this is ur best poem!! Love ur work! I think i may know how you feel bella! We will talk on msn...i added u!!! I am allthingsnice_8@hotmail.com
love ya
Stace xoxoxxo
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INTENSE, BUT GOOD!
Wow! This is quite a write.
Well written.
Keep up the good writing
and thanks for your very sweet comment
as well.
God bless!
Brian -
Hiya 'flossy 1919'
Thanxz for the comment!
And yes I alway pray for my brother but when he was alive i prayed he would be ok and live it didn't work then It wont work now!
Thanxz anyways!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxSignle GirlxX -
hey, good job! cant believe u would put your work down to not being 'good'. this is an amazing poem. as you no, i no how you feel, but things will get better. lets keep our heads up high and pray for the ones we've lost and loved. keep writtin!
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Hiya Gary,
Thanks for the comment babe!
All my best!
God Bless!
Hope your Aunty is ok?
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxSingle GirlxX -
sarah this has come from the heart and is written with love and it is a good poem see you a round
XXXgary homerXXX
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Hiya 'Pozo'
Thanks for the comment babe and you do not have to thank me for commenting on you I love commenting on you For you are a gr8 poet!
All my best!
Thanks Once Again!
God Bless!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxSingle GirlxX -
Aww this is so sad and well written
Keep writing, this was a great poem- thanks for your comment on my poem
All the best,
Pozo
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Hiya Mummy Linda!
Thanxz for the comment!
Thanks for everything
I love you!
XxSarahxX AKA XxJellyBeanxX AKA XxSingle GirlxX -
Sarah, I am so sorry for your loss. You were very brave, while staring at your wrist , not to cut. I applaud your strong will and I will pray for your brother's soul.Please darling fix the one spelling error I found.Change See's to sees. great write but I fell so bad for you and your family. Many hugs, Linda XOXOXOXO
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Hiya Kerrie ya babe grl I know thanxz I love you loads
XxSarahxX
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aww bless huni, you know i am always here for you. you can tell this poem has come from the heart and is written with love
Love ya Kerrie
Keep up the great poetry xXx
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