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Crying For Love

Laying In my bed
With you on my mind
I start to cry
Why iam i crying?!
Your all that i need
and i have you
I cry because
I dont understand why
I have your love
But not your touch
The one i long for
I dont want anyone but,
YOU!
But this is causing my heart to ache
Your love fills me
with Patience and Passion
Till we met
You Promise me everything
Will be ok
And trust me i know it will be
Just the thought
Makes me ache in side
Iam sorry i just dont understand

I Love You Richie *O2*15*05*

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Just To My Boyfriend
Written April 26th, 2005

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  • bigrich88
    April 30, 2005
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    loved it

    I absolutely loved it I wish i could tell you the reason, but i dont know it either...all I know is I love you with all my heart