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Words

Words in my mind,
Things I should say.
Why won't I?
I sit back like a coward,
Like the person who doesn't speak.
All these things,
Stuck in my head,
Things that will stay there,
Even beyond my death.


"Loyalty is a lie."
"The truth is just a trap."

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Written April 21st, 2005

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  • Confused Gemini
    April 26, 2005
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    I wrote this the other day and I was extremely upset. It sucks to my but then again I hate all my writings.

    Gem

  • puke
    April 26, 2005
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    i like it. its a good concept. there is not much flow and no structure that i can see, but not all poetry needs it. sometimes poetry has to build itself around a poem, and not the other way around