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What do you see when you look
 inside yourself?
Is it emptiness? Or maybe
            scattered thoughts
 trying to make up a collective being?
Perhaps it's just garbled garbage
 strewn about in a mess of confusion?
It could be hope or understanding,
 reflection on the past,
 or anticipation of the future.

Ultimately, is what you see
 - reality?
 - or is this just a perception?

Most importantly - is this you?

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Written April 26th, 2005

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