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Dark Eyes

I see your clear blue eyes,
it makes me want to cry,
to see your empty smile.

I look into gray eyes,
happiness makes me cry,
to see a jovial soul...

I see hazel-stained eyes,
I could just lay and die,
to see no soul beyond...

see beautiful green eyes,
inside they want to cry,
to see my tear-stained face...

I see those dark eyes,
the ones I see in you,
I see the scars from cries,
I'm cradled in your gaze...

I read behind the eyes,
to where they can't hold lies
I saw something there...

what I didn't know,
was you were reading mine,
my soul's been searched by your dark eyes

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Written April 26th, 2005

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  • shadow rose
    April 28, 2005
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    Nice write, dear. Call me!
    I love you!

    ~~shadow rose~~


  • Jessica Lee 003
    April 26, 2005
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    amazing work keep up the great work <3 -Jessica

  • crackattack
    April 26, 2005
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    Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like it!!! keep up the good work!!! good luck with more poems!
    xo Amanda