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It's Magical

What a rainy, dreary day...
it's wonderful.
What a foggy, misty day,
it's beautiful.

for I love to dance in the rain.
brightens my soul
puts my past behind my mind
inside warm cold...

lay on blankets in the field,
watch it fall down
cry for the ones that aren't there
let tears wash to the ground...

with my dripping hair, wet shirt,
pants saturated,
forget my every problem,
I don't hate it!

for i love that great great rain
it's beautiful,
and I love the fog and mist,
it's wonderful,

it's this, nothing less, nothing more...
            it's magical

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Written April 26th, 2005

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  • justin d-
    April 26, 2005
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    I love rain amanda, as ya know.. this was a very very great poem.. and i love you.. Bye

  • Girlinthewild
    April 26, 2005
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    I really liked this poem. I thought it was sweet and somewhat haiku like (even though it isn't at all, probably the nature thing). I personally LOVE rain so I really liked the whole rain theme. Nice job!