u make me feel as though my heart is ripping, tearing, pulling from my chest.
U make my breaths uneasy and stifled with pain.
I feel like I'm paralyzed and could not move if my life depended on it.
You touch my skin and goosebumps form.
You grab my hand, i pull away
My mind tells me to stop but my fingers wont listen.
They gently touch your face, and a sharp stab of pain hits my stomach.
A pain of de' ja vu, and at that moment tears form in my eyes.
I missed the way you smell so i move closer.
But then i remember how much it hurt the first time we were together, and how i promised never to be around u again.
I back away and walk the opposite direction. You call my name and i shake my head, shaking away tears.
i didn't think i could do it, but i did.
I walked away from the person i loved so much that i craved their smell.
I walked away from the person i hated so much because of him putting me aside.
I'm in between and there is nowhere to go...I'm in limbo and there is nothing i can do.
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Written April 26th, 2005
A contest entry
- Rip out my heart- heartbreaking poetry!!! by Jenn-Swenson.
500 points, ended May 3, 2005, 21 entries
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Kool poem, i can sorta relate - i aint had a chance to walk away but I probs wudnt neway...
Anywho this was such a good poem - it portrayed so much emotion, keep up the good writing
Cprl Kleg -
Aw man. Kick ass poem. I love how it shows so much feeling without droneing on for pages on end. And it kinda hits you right here *points at a drawing of a human heart* right in your drawing of a human heart. Great poem maybe you should post a few more
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omg i loved this ive done that before i walked away from my true love and i wanted to DIE right then and there so yea i can soo relate to this its awsome!
~crystal~ -
cool, i liked it alot! no rhyming but still really good, good job kallie!! NOT boring.
boring is what my mom is making me do at her fucking work!!!! lol
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booooooring.
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