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Dark

Dark evades light
Swallowing it whole
Tears unshed, hearts unbroken
dark evades light
forever hiding its ways
of vicious cruelty
Dark evades light
Swallowing it whole

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I have absolutely no idea. It pretty much wrote itself.
Written April 26th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 30, 2005
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    It's quite OK that you haven't commented on much. I can understand your situation. Glad you liked it though. Take care.

  • Grieving-Willow
    April 29, 2005
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    This is beautiful Well written... sorry it has taken me so long to read and comment on your beautiful masterpieces, I'm hoping to be back on ap by Monday on a more regular basis, otherwise I'm afriad I'm limited to internat access. Anyways, I hope all is well. Beautiful done by a wonderful poet & friend ---Sara

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 28, 2005
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    It wasn't confusing at all! Hmm...I wonder why you never start talking to me first. Anyway, thanks for the comment.
  • Chained Fury
    April 28, 2005
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    Hmmmm...Well considering it came out of nowhere...Darkness and light can really go both ways. Darkness evades light, and light evades dark. Either can completely consume one another...Now I think I have thought too much and have made this more complicated then it needs to be. Err I think I hurt my head. Anyways my thinking has been mixed up all of a sudden so I really don't know what to say...I have confused myself haha. Well see you around Rose, I just don't seem to be with it today.

    -Chained Fury

  • GauArrowny
    April 27, 2005
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    Yeah, short, but good. Not sure of anything about it except for the random poem that just 'appears' on the paper, but whatever. It's good and reminds me of black holes.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 27, 2005
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    I don't know how I cam up with this. Glad you understand it though.
  • Silhouetted Angel
    April 26, 2005
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    holds dark down and drowns it in the light
    I dunno why.. but that sounded good..

    scratches head I'm so lost right now... a couple minutes later Okay .. re-read understood... Lovely poemy honey.

    ~Angel

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it.

  • Wings of Dawn
    April 26, 2005
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    There you go! Thats the feeling I so often get! The poem is there, and it needs to be written, and we poets are only the means. If the poem doesnt say exactly what we were thinking, or if we weren't thinking at all, so be it!
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